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You want to burn your bridges?
Fine.
Fuel the blaze with our past;
The nights I said "I love you"
And sat next to you while we
Watched the same horror movie
For the ten billionth time,
The days I spent wandering
Fields and holding your hand.
I'll turn back the clock and
Paint my face with ashes.
My warcry will ring through
The shadows left by our kisses
When I dump all my love letters
Into the roiling ocean.
It'll be the biggest crucifixion of love the world has ever seen.
Fine.
Fuel the blaze with our past;
The nights I said "I love you"
And sat next to you while we
Watched the same horror movie
For the ten billionth time,
The days I spent wandering
Fields and holding your hand.
I'll turn back the clock and
Paint my face with ashes.
My warcry will ring through
The shadows left by our kisses
When I dump all my love letters
Into the roiling ocean.
It'll be the biggest crucifixion of love the world has ever seen.
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Slowly coming out of it, you guys.
This is the result of another bout of sudden insipartion. Gotta love it. Also, yes I was thinking about the Boston Tea Party when I wrote this. Could you tell?
AND. I have a few more questions for you.
> Does the poem flow?
> Is it over-dramatic? If so, is that point good or bad?
> How can I make this poem better?
Feel free to comment/fave. Feedback (good or bad) is appreciated.
This is the result of another bout of sudden insipartion. Gotta love it. Also, yes I was thinking about the Boston Tea Party when I wrote this. Could you tell?
AND. I have a few more questions for you.
> Does the poem flow?
> Is it over-dramatic? If so, is that point good or bad?
> How can I make this poem better?
Feel free to comment/fave. Feedback (good or bad) is appreciated.
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